Content Reviewers Wanted

 

I’ve written a 4500-word essay for old guys looking for love. (Somebody needs to tell them how to do it!) I’m providing the piece here if you are interested in reviewing it and giving me your thoughts about it. I’m not looking for grammar correction (although it undoubtedly needs it) — I would just like feedback about how you think it can be improved. I know many older subscribers have a lot to offer and I would appreciate receiving your thoughts. Don’t be afraid to tell me you hate it and why you hate it. I want to be helpful. If you love, let me know why. Maybe I’m being too soft on the olkd guys. Here is the link to read it